it's great for your first minitage! now some advice, k?
yeah, i've never made a vid before in my life, but i know what makes them interesting, ços I'm a scanner.
YOU NEED LESS -
clips of you doing nothing, cut to the shot, or at least 1 second before the shot. doing nothing gets your viewers bored.
spray n' prayin, unless this is how you get a triple kill, or a quad or a cinq, or a sextuple kill or whatever, the spraying will get you on the bad side of your viewers.
YOU NEED MORE -
shots, like just the shot that kills the person, take for example 30 half-second clips of you killing a person, the stick them all together, you get? no?
other than that, I can see you become the next death_unites_us.
Subject: well... 