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PostSubject: Some of my old writing   Fri Feb 04, 2011 2:55 am

I was thinking today about my old English class. The teacher made us work, but in that class I wrote some really good stuff that allowed me to express myself and get my emotions out onto paper where I could look at them.

This is from, hard to believe it, 3 years ago, so keep that in mind. You don't have to respond to it at all if you don't want to, I thought it would just be interesting to put some old schoolwork down here for you to look at if you want to.

I'll just post this poem I wrote for now. If you want more, let me know:


Once Gone

Another dream about you,
Another day that never saw night.
We took hands and we flew,
Your crystal eyes bore witnesses’ sight.

Regret I do not, for you will find
My mind, like stone, doesn’t bend.
Only breaks, only shambles left behind
It’s certain only you can truly mend.

But it’s said through miracles dreams do come true;
For a one and million girl, a one and million chance.
Because through the blood and tears I always knew;
We would embrace again, and dance our only dance.

Touching hands again in this life,
Will finally end all of this strife.

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And then, we'll soar. It doesn't matter what you've done, what I've done, what has happened and what is about to happen. I know, it hurts. But the truth is, I don't care anymore. I don't care because I have something far more important to care about now. I have you, and you are everything I'll ever need and ever wanted. So, we'll leave that all behind, we'll make our own destiny, together, and then, we'll soar.


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PostSubject: Re: Some of my old writing   Fri Feb 04, 2011 12:53 pm

that's really good death, please post more
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PostSubject: Re: Some of my old writing   Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:01 am

This is the cover to a portfolio I had to do for the English Class. The cover had to portray the writings inside. The writings were about a certain thing inside me that I believed would never change, so I created the cover accordingly. This was just the page I printed out, the final copy was printed on red paper, and the words were darkened.


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PostSubject: Re: Some of my old writing   Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:38 am

death_unites_us wrote:
I was thinking today about my old English class. The teacher made us work, but in that class I wrote some really good stuff that allowed me to express myself and get my emotions out onto paper where I could look at them.

This is from, hard to believe it, 3 years ago, so keep that in mind. You don't have to respond to it at all if you don't want to, I thought it would just be interesting to put some old schoolwork down here for you to look at if you want to.

I'll just post this poem I wrote for now. If you want more, let me know:


Once Gone

Another dream about you,
Another day that never saw night.
We took hands and we flew,
Your crystal eyes bore witnesses’ sight.

Regret I do not, for you will find
My mind, like stone, doesn’t bend.
Only breaks, only shambles left behind
It’s certain only you can truly mend.

But it’s said through miracles dreams do come true;
For a one and million girl, a one and million chance.
Because through the blood and tears I always knew;
We would embrace again, and dance our only dance.

Touching hands again in this life,
Will finally end all of this strife.

Wow thats actually really good, poetry is something i've always been terrible at lol Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Some of my old writing   Sun May 22, 2011 12:26 pm

This was a poem I wrote at the end of the notebook who's cover is above. The objective was to lead the reader to the end of the notebook and leave them with a choice: either board the train, and leave everything behind, or stay and let the negative feelings eat at you forever. Looking at it now, it's an interesting concept because I have learned now to not run away from your fears, but to instead embrace them. However it seems as though at first you have to run; you have to gain distance from the problem. Then you can gather strength, and when you are ready you can face the problem head on.


To Let Go

Letting go-
is a train on an endless track.
As you stand on the platform,
everything is holding you back.

Boarding the train-
leaving it all behind.
Watching it all fade,
hoping for a future you may find.

On the train-
waiting for it all to go away.
But have you been selfish,
have you forgotten someone in the fray?

Returning-
because you want to see.
All that you have left behind,
but then you will never be free.

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And then, we'll soar. It doesn't matter what you've done, what I've done, what has happened and what is about to happen. I know, it hurts. But the truth is, I don't care anymore. I don't care because I have something far more important to care about now. I have you, and you are everything I'll ever need and ever wanted. So, we'll leave that all behind, we'll make our own destiny, together, and then, we'll soar.
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